[Report This]Date: September 30 2023 5:37 AM Title: Guyen Station Pt 1
Ok, so by very soon, you meant very soon. I guess I should've waited a few hours lol.
I would agree that this is your best prose yet. The descriptions of Martin waking up from the cryochamber were really vivid, as well as the entire Guyen Station. I could see myself walking through it just as the characters did, and that's some impressive detailing there! And though this was a smut light chapter, the changing room and motel scenes were both certifiably tantalizing.
This chapter's ending made me realize how clever the heat/metabolism relationship is in regards to getting Martin into smutty positions, so kudos on setting that up. So yeah, this chapter just further reinforces my excitement for more. Great work!
Author's Response:
Your review just gave me the little jolt I needed to finish it up. Again, I am so very happy you are enjoying this series. I intended for this chapter to be a short one, but it ended up being nearly as long as all of the chapters before it combined, which is awesome. Next chapter will continue in the same way as this one, and by then we’ll be on our way to Edo