Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2024 10:54 PM Title: Ylid Pt 1

The description of how Martin connected directly to Tenebris' senses from within her rectum was cool. I love the specific details of how her emulated voice sounds different because there's no breathing involved and the stuff about actual eyesight being different from how a person's brain processes it. Little things like that are a pleasant reminder of how smartly written this story is (sometimes too smart for me lol, but that's very much a good thing).

Also loved Martin noticing a small scar on Tenebris' butt. Like, it's such a minor thing to point out, but it feels fitting that he'd make note of it anyway.

Also loving bodily orifices fulfilling their true purpose of storing and carrying tinies. Always a good time and somehow less grotesque than living flesh elevators.

The conflict between the two leads and Tenebris' continuous internal conflict continues to be engaging and I'm excited to see where things go from here.