Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 10 Life in a Cage

The first half of this chapter had me almost in tears of laughter, a rare treat on a forum which usually effects other parts of me. It reminds me of years ago, when I took my codeine-constipated bowels to the doctor. He said "Your bowel has to move at its natural pace. No amount of grunting and straining can speed things up."

Maybe Jen is of a species with different bowels.
Glad you've gotten in touch with life, but not as our doctors know it. LOL.

Author's Response: Laughter is a good thing!  Makes up for the crying in earlier writings. LOL