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Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2023 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very good short story! Look forward to seeing more from you.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I've got lots of stories in the pipe.

Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2023 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Succubi make for some great fetish smut. I loved all the teasing and the back and forth between Janice and Jeremy, his admirable ability to stave off the nut despite how enthralling all of Janice's scenarios were (the fact he held it in during a wet dream is seriously impressive). I also really liked the smaller moments of characterization, like Janice insisting it had to be him she fed off of and not some other guy with the same kink , and their conversation in the lab. I'm almost sad he couldn't succeed in the end, but there's always next year!



Author's Response:

Succubi are some of the best for this kind of thing, and the back and forth was a fun element to write. Jeremy might not have won this time, but he's still gained a lot.

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2023 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I was wondering when you were going to do another succubus story. I liked it, though if he was a foot bitch, I wished there were more foot scenes.



Author's Response: In retrospect I should have put some more at the beginning, still I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Maiqtheliar8888 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2023 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I read this and was like "wait, why's this actually a good story?" then i saw who it was by. great job as always!



Author's Response:

Thanks lol

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