[Report This]Date: March 15 2024 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 3: Puccini’s Law
Really like this premise and everything you have set up before. Looking forward to whatever happens next. Nicely done!
[Report This]Date: March 15 2024 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 3: Puccini’s Law
Yoooooooooo happy to see you back with this great story again
And this might be my favorite so far
[Report This]Date: January 30 2024 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Blood
Great start! I'm looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: January 15 2024 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: Drug Epidemic
Oh wow I'm so glad you dipped into shrinking nanoscopic or flat out disappearing. I really hope we see some interaction when these people end up super small (or gone completely) from the point of view of the shrinking person (and hopefully from the point of view of the shrinking people here and there).
Great work so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)
That will happen sometime soon ;D
[Report This]Date: January 15 2024 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: Drug Epidemic
Once again I’m loving the story so far and hell yes to some butt action!!!!!
Anyway you are doing a great job I will say that the characters are still somewhat good but could be better here there I don’t know if it’s just random people well me throughout the story or will have a main cast but again your doing great
Author's Response: Thank you!
Your review inspired me to tie my characters more closely together :)
I was also worried that I am just pulling the story too far out by introducing all these new characters.
So in Chapter 3, I focused on tying the previous chapters together :)
[Report This]Date: January 10 2024 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Blood
I think this was a great start and I can’t wait to see how the story develops
Author's Response:
Thank you! : )
[Report This]Date: January 10 2024 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Blood
I was not expecting such an explosive twist! I'm definitely interested to see where this is going and I hope you make great use of the micro and nano tags!
I think my one suggestion (and this is really a me thing more than anything) is try to find a way to quantify the size of characters, even if it's a rough estimation of size. It really helps to paint the picture of what's going on and it satisfies my autism.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestion! I incorporated it in the next chapter! :)