Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2024 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

Janet is awesome, hope to see her bigger and thicker

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2024 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

Really enjoyed this short piece of erotica. It was amusing how Olivia and the other women weren't quite aware of their sudden growth spurts, basically shrugging them off and being all like "Ah, whatever, no biggie!" as if they had always been big girls their entire lives. The scene in the changing room was probably my favorite part, as I was pondering whether Olivia would abruptly grow out of it as I was reading it the first time around (glad my prediction came true!). It would be nice to imagine Olivia and Silas being a couple, with Silas borderline worshipping Olivia for her statuesque figure as she stands large and proud over everything and everyone around her, with Olivia rewarding such earnest devotion with some fun in the bedroom later (I imagine Olivia being on the bottom the vast majority of the time to avoid hurting Silas if they ever got intimate like that, even though she could most certainly be on top of she so desired).

Anyways, good stuff!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Jim <3 

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2024 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

So far pretty good story. wouldn't mind reading more.