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Reviewer: autiphilia Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2018 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story. This is a love story, one with more heart than any romance movie. I love the characters; Alex is relatable, Emily is admirable, each sees the other as a person and not just something to be used or be used by sexually. I love the realism; there is an admission of physics and biology. I love the normalcy; neither lead is a fetishist but rather just someone who fell in love with a person of a very different size, and Emily and her friends react with believeable disregard for Alex's situation. If this was your first giantess story you got off to a good start.

The only thing I would change is how much foot rubbing there is, but that's just me. I'm not a foot fetishist but I realize I'm in the distinct minority among macrophiles.

Reviewer: Eros Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story was amazing to say the very least. Most stories on this site, that I have read, have all used the same rampaging bitch-like giantess that is a killing machine, but this one was very unique and had enjoyable characters, loved every bit of it! Don't stop writing!

Reviewer: amsting9023 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Malaka does it again! This story follows the journey of an ordinary introverted boy struggling to survive after mysteriously being shrunk down.  He starts living his life to the fullest when a caring young girl finds him and takes care of him.  Although he may seem a bit whiny, but its showcases the difficulty of being as small as a bug and ordinary life and comforts being taken away.  As the relationship develops, Malaka's story showcases that love is unconditional and size does not matter.  It gives hope to giantess fans that a loving relationship can work if it existed in real life.  I'll say again, I would like this to be a book or film. Such great romantic works Malaka!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the praise, it's nice to hear from someone who seems to love giantess romance stories as much as I do! This was the first story I wrote for this site, so if I were to rewrite it today it'd probably come out a lot different (and longer, lol!) For some reason I seem to like love stories where the guy is weak and helpless and the girl is strong and powerful.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah I found this story while just browsing and read it. And now, it's my favorite story here.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks very much! It's my first story, so it's probably the one that best describes my feelings about the giantess fantasy.

Reviewer: T-Rex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this one. I remember reading it ages ago and stumbled upon it and read it a second time, and enjoying it all over again.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

Emily and Alex do seem to fall in love rather quickly, but that's part of the fun right? I hope you come back to writing it soon.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

As this is a gentle-giantess story, I'm reasonably sure they'll be mindful of Little Al's fragility, for Emily's sake.

But, you must admit: that's a pretty rare exception to the usual rule! I.e., collegiate gentle-gts introduces shrunken man to sorority sister(s), who promptly confiscate him as love-slave.

Author's Response: Yeah, you're right, it is kind of an exception. Of course, in my defense, I have no idea how real college girls would react in a situation like this. But i think the friendship between them is strong enough for them to respect each other. (I'm still planning to introduce some more aggressive GTS characters, though!)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 7

Yep! Cathy initially proved the rule (just like I said).

Nice chapter; quite emotionally plausible!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

And, the suspense increases!

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

YES!!!!! :-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

"What's the worst that could happen...?"

Every male character who says that in these kinds of stories always seems to jinx it for themselves! :-(

Author's Response: They think they could handle the worst, and they're always mistaken. When will they learn to play it safe? :-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

My compliments on avoiding the usual cliche' of keeping her unaware for the first half-dozen chapters.

When it's a gentle-giantess story, I like to see the interaction ASAP.

:-)

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, long chapters without interaction aren't much fun to write! I had to leave Alex by himself for some time, though, so that his attraction to Emily will be stronger when she shows up.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmmmm! Waking up naked would normally mean he shrank but his clothes didn't. The only problem is: by all rights, HE SHOULD HAVE AWAKENED ON THE KITCCHEN FLOOR BENEATH THEM!

Which raises the questions: what happened to his clothes, and how did he get _inside_ the cabinet?

On to chapter 2, to find out.

Author's Response: I'm writing the second story, and I'm sure your questions will be answered, if you can wait a few more chapters. Thanks for all the reviews, it's always good to see a story having this much of an impact.

Reviewer: Zilla234 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

awsome story

Reviewer: ImDownHere Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

good story. I like the way you left the ending open to add more sometime.  hope you do

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll definitely continue this story. I've already worked out the squel, but I'm writing a new story first. Hope you like it!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

This was a very fun and entertaining story, well done. Looking forward to your next story.
Aaron

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I've started writing again today, so I hope you like it! Glad you enjoyed this story.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

Excellent chapter as usual. Love the fact that even his punishments are enjoyed by both of them. Wish the message would have been longer though. Hope that her friends adore him as much as Emily does.
Ps would like them to play some kind of game pertaining to their playfulness, and also their feet. Also thought that his silk dress sounded hilarious, but had to be embarrassing.
Aaron

Author's Response:

I really appreciate your reviews. It's great to see that I'm not the only one who prefers giantesses to be kind and friendly, rather than cruel.

PS The massage scene was a bit short, i agree. But I kind of want to get to the ending quickly, so I can begin my next story.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, its hard to believe this is your first story. You have a wonderfully realitic way of writing your characters. They pop out and come to life for the most part.

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked the story! I have written others before, but I never got around to completing them. Maybe I'll do so now, though, with all the great reviews this story's getting.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2010 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

Cute story. A few questions occur to me -- What happened to the mysterious bottle that shrank him and where did it come from? The apartment's former tenant? Also curious what will happen when she introduces him to her friends.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! Your questions will be answered, but it'll probably be a while...some other stuff's gonna happen first. Still, thanks for the review, I'll be back writing sometime during the week.

Reviewer: WilliamScarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying this story a great deal, thank you so much as this is the kind of fun story I look for here.. I look forward to reading more.. thank you!

Author's Response:

Very glad you like it! There'll definitely be more, though I can't say exactly when...I'm pretty busy at the moment with other things. Stay tuned!!

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