Reviews For The beach
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Reviewer: someguy1900 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2006 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

i enjoyed this one, also. it was a good story. unaware micro = the greatest.

Author's Response: thanks you someguy! i think it's a good combination too! i'm sure i'll go back to it in the future.

Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2006 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

I read this at Giantess Planet. You did a great job! Did they get shrunk, or travel to a world of giants? Either way, it was cool!

Author's Response: Thanks Ace! Im my opinion, they got shrunk during some weird storm. they should have stayed in that boat, poor guys :-)

Reviewer: Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 15 2006 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked this story, even with all of the mistakes, it maintained my interest. But I make a lot of mistakes too. It would have been interesting if the girls had discovered him.
discovered hi

Author's Response: thanks stan, a few mistakes all right, i typed this one in one go, without looking back much and without my trusty spell check (english is not my mother language). good thing there is still something in it then.

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Author's Response: Here goes. i stand, like my text now, corrected :-)

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