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Reviewer: SilentStep Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 4:10 PM Title: Son Burnt

I'm working on a Daz3d version of this story and it's coming out swell... Of 'The Ex Files'
that is... :) 

 

 

 

 

With full credit to Ace Jack when I'm finished... :) 

Here's a screenshot of one the frames!

Image 1:
https://c10.patreonusercontent.com/3/eyJwIjoxfQ%3D%3D/patreon-media/p/post/41036590/9f3a714fcdf54a7f87bf6319a6d05171/1.png?token-time=1600146394&token-hash=nrovtPhC593RV1QtQFdU4DhPsWfFGNbaA0cDHwDjXx4%3D

Just so you know that's one single frame out of 20 so far! The story is coming along very well now! :D Including make the skin flakes on the boy's body... Check this frame out! :D 

https://c10.patreonusercontent.com/3/eyJwIjoxfQ%3D%3D/patreon-media/p/post/41036590/9ca8f8dc5e9a42eca9f941b00ac0f575/1.png?token-time=1600358800&token-hash=m8fmkerb5xtYL3nyDKnlTEdRxLmVqt24mJ5WU6Wg7cE%3D

That's when he maxes out the skin flakes... Hot stuff huh?! I love this story so much that I'm working hard on it to put on Gumroad.. Please author.. Message me if you want a free copy of the story... :D Thank you! 

Reviewer: D F Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2016 4:28 AM Title: Son Burnt

One of the first stories that I ever read on this site. If you ever look at this, please know that we love your stories and hope you come back to write more.

 

FOR THOSE WHO MISSED THE CONDOM CONUNDRUM 1-4:

Here's a pastebin of 1-5 (provided by el rooto)

http://pastebin.com/DGr5iP64

Reviewer: DRAGONGOD01 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 3:30 AM Title: Son Burnt

SOME OF YOUR CHAPTERS OF THE CODOM  CONDORUM ARE CONE PACE 13 TILL 16

SHAME I NEVER READ IT AND I HEARD ITS WAS THE BEST PART

Reviewer: wizard13335 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2013 11:04 PM Title: Son Burnt

What happened to The Condom Conundrum? That was the best part, although the entire series is excellent.

Reviewer: jimmyjimmy1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 5:06 PM Title: Son Burnt

Great story, but what happened to parts 1-4 of the condom conundrum?

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 4:02 PM Title: Son Burnt

Absolutely brillient addition! I love how she is hellbent on forcing ejaculation after ejaculation from him.  Even after his soon-to-be orgasm beneath her toe, I'd like to see her force at least one more, only this time, simply allow the pungent smell of her feet to coax it out of him, nothing more! She could scrunch his head and upper torso beneath the tolds of her toes, and simply hold him up until she sees the eventualy "explosion.!"

Reviewer: Azra Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2011 1:08 AM Title: Son Burnt

Certainly hope to see another update soon, yours is by far my favourite series on the site.

 

Regardless, best wishes!

 

Azra

Reviewer: zacharyded Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2011 10:50 PM Title: Son Burnt

idea for more stars. you should make the first 3. have a secound edition 2 it

Reviewer: Azra Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2011 12:26 PM Title: Son Burnt

What a good ending to that tale! Your description of Ted's mindset as he did the deed was exquisite. I keep hoping you'll do a butt-centred story soon, but I'm sensing that's not your preference, so kudos to you for sticking to what you enjoy!

I'm more a fan of aware-stories because I think it addresses the psychological aspect more, so I imagine your new story set won't be just as much to my personal liking as The Smush Is Right was, but it's still remarkably well written and going interesting places. If you ever consider it though, I'd love to see another chapter of Son-Burnt or Promishment.

Regardless, great work!



Author's Response:

Sequels may be in the works.  Butt-centered, for me, is an almost certain "dead-end" for the character (no pun intended). 

Reviewer: Azra Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2011 4:20 PM Title: Son Burnt

What a treat it is to see this back in action.

 

Ace Jack always manages to craft an interesting story, particularly when he's doing a mother-son piece, and the psychological aspect is always one of his strong points.

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate the comments.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2010 12:43 PM Title: Son Burnt

great stories. love the second the most

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2010 9:02 PM Title: Son Burnt

Your latest is one the best pieces you'e written!  I really enjoyed the nonchalant cruelty of the mother regarding her son, who I got the impression was either going to be crushed into a stain at night's end, or suffer emotional devestation for the rest of his life.  Either way, this one really was enjoyable to read!

Reviewer: Seabee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2010 4:20 PM Title: Son Burnt

Awesome stuff.  Thanks for continuing!

Reviewer: Azra Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2010 12:42 PM Title: Son Burnt

I think one of the most remarkable features of your writing is the restraint you are capable of in the interaction between mother and son. You never rush to the moneyshot but when it gets there it's well worth it.

Personally speaking I love the caring, certain tone used by your mother characters as they dominate their sons much more than when they are simply unaware, both Prom-ishment and Son Burnt are great examples of this. I'd love to see more work involving butts as well as feet, perhaps with a bit of squeezing as well as sitting, but whatever you come up with will definitely not disappoint.

Great work!

Reviewer: VoyuerFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2010 12:57 PM Title: Son Burnt

We need more. These stories are great especially the 2nd one

Reviewer: InYourShoe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2010 6:32 PM Title: Son Burnt

Are you going to right more??? really enjoyed them.

Reviewer: Ronnie Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2010 6:18 PM Title: Son Burnt

Great to see you back in action, Ace!  Loved the second story.

Reviewer: chrix Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2010 9:15 AM Title: Son Burnt

Great story so far! I'd love to see some more "butt" then "feet" ah well, that's my fetish, can't wait till next part :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 12:49 PM Title: Son Burnt

in that case, hope that some of the mothers have daughters to work their feet.
but, would really like to see a gentle giantess mom.

anywho, this story has plenty of opportunities to explore which will hopefully envolve more beautiful giantess feet.

aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 10:53 AM Title: Son Burnt

Great to see you back, and this story's right up my ally. Can't wait for him to paint her toenails after they both cool down first, lol
And is he 1" or 2" tall?

Aaron

Ps hope that he starts to enjoy his mothers sexy feet.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment.  As each chapter is a seperate story, I'm afraid we won't see Zach's fate--but there's more stories to come!

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