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Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is your best yarn yet.
Love the hilarious tumbling helplessly into the woman's bubblebath.

Author's Response: Thanks, again. Btw: I might be throwing in some vintage movie-serial references in later chapters. Just to enhance the camp. ;-)

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