[Report This]Date: January 16 2023 9:43 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
This collection of stories are incredible. Each one is just as good as the last and its an incredibly vivid and easy read. I will keep hoping for the day more are added.
Author's Response:
Maybe someday! I'm not dead, yet! 😂
[Report This]Date: November 14 2019 6:02 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
kinda hope youre still out there. I wished so much youd write again. I miss your chapters so much.
Author's Response:
Still alive. No worries.
Date: March 11 2019 1:14 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
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Date: February 27 2019 2:50 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
hey you still around? this story was always interesting
Date: September 11 2018 11:29 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
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[Report This]Date: April 09 2018 10:30 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
never too late. this story is one of my favorite. glad to see you havent let it die. hope to see more in the future.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2018 9:47 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
I saw you commented on the story Dying for Booty, you have to write on your story too sir !!! please : <
Date: November 29 2017 6:10 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
how are you? I know bothering, lol. I still look on here every few days for a magical update. hope you get time again soon for that. I would LOVE a nano/micro plot unaware, where some very unlucky "ex" boyfriend, or "loser" gets a very unfortunate ending, becoming just a micro speck glued on a girls anus, and then he takes a shit. I loved this unfairness chapters the most of yours, maybe a shy roommate in college gets shrunk, who has struggles with his grades and has no job/money, and then life literally shts on him again.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2017 5:38 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
please continue, this story is just the best
[Report This]Date: February 03 2017 5:35 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
Hey dude! Hope you still around. Whenever I am bored I come on here and read through this story. it's the best ever written on here, the best unaware, the best scat, the best booty vore. It's just the best... I would had so many ideas still for cruel and nightmarish unfortunate shrinkings, like realy nano shrinking, sizess of fleas or even smaller. Looking like every week or two if you maybe wrote some new chapter. This story just cant die, it's just too good or that.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2016 1:34 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
What can be said? A story about booty is a good story, indeed.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 7:12 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
One of the best stories/ending chapters I have ever read. Why didnt I find out about this jewel earlier :'/ <3
[Report This]Date: September 28 2013 9:11 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
I love your stories I can never find other stories with the unaware toilet stuff like yours
[Report This]Date: July 26 2011 2:09 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
really love your stories. not enough writers venture into such depths. I was wondering if maybe you could do one involving diapers?
[Report This]Date: July 02 2011 10:19 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
This is probably my favourite series on the site. Thank you and please keep writing, your latest chapter was definately my favourite so far.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2011 11:45 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
First of all, I should apologise for not reviewing sooner. I've a few things to say, but first and foremost, thank you. I've really enjoyed reading your stories, I find them to be pure fetish stories in which you get what you want. I'm not the type of reader that sits for 5 chapters to get to know a character and then a further 3 for size changing. I like that it happens and you don't dwell on the intricacies.
The thing is though, that since you're writing one particular genre type. Booty/Butt, it can become difficult to reinvent a situation. You're solely trying to do it with different characters and scenarios. However, if you were to change up the personas of the characters, you'd have a lot more to work with and your readers would probably like to see more. A typical example. If you allowed the guy to live, or to be trapped permanently, leaving the story with an open end, the reader will see a break in your typical writing mould. Again, if the giantess was aware of the situation, it would cater to a giant audience. Many readers enjoy the giantess being dominant, so you'd have more people reading I would imagine.
You have the same general outline which can at times make the story boring. We know that any future chapter you have will have a guy, that is instantly shrunk without any explanation. He'll be apprehended by a giant girl who will unknowingly have him climb her trousers/underwear/butt, only to find himself falling back into her crack in the same manner as all the others. Then he'll be apprehended by the anus, fall in love with it, be farted on, be horrified at his situation, then succumb to her ass.
Oh, and ass gunk, when you write words like that, it feels as though you're trying to be polite. Sometimes saying the crude words like Shit, make the story work.
That's my review for your stories. I appreciate that you write for yourself, but with your talent, you can do better.
Thornton.
Author's Response:
Very well thought-out review. Thank you. I like seeing this kind of constructive criticism.
Date: June 01 2011 9:22 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
Sorry that last review was somone else on my computer. True these stories aren't my thing. But I'm not as blunt as that last review was
[Report This]Date: June 01 2011 3:54 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
These stories suck. they are extremly boring. Make them longer and put more thought into them please
Author's Response:
I appreciate bluntness to some extent, but please use a little more finess. If you don't like them, you say so nicely and explain why.
Author's Response:
I appreciate bluntness to some extent, but please use a little more finess. If you don't like them, you say so nicely and explain why.
I can't help but notice that you left this review on the first story. You'll note that they increase in length as you go down the line. The latest one is over 5000 words.
Author's Response:
I appreciate bluntness to some extent, but please use a little more finess. If you don't like them, you say so nicely and explain why.
I can't help but notice that you left this review on the first story. You'll note that they increase in length as you go down the line. The latest one is over 5000 words.
Ok, since I can't figure out how to edit these, here's a third one; I just noticed that you reviewed this already and gave it a low rating (which is fine), but don't you think it's a little think it's a tad in excess to review the same story and give it an even lower score?
[Report This]Date: May 23 2011 8:40 AM Title: Plumbing Problems
The stories are a little too short for me. To me they are over before I really have a chance to get in to them.
Author's Response:
That would be why the description says they're short. But thank for the input.
Date: April 22 2011 2:28 PM Title: Plumbing Problems
Too much and too little at the same time. You have a multiple of short stories, but all of them are too short. What makes a story great is the vivid and lifelike details that makes the reader feel like they were actually living the story. You've got good ideas, but they fall flat because right after you get started, it ends and it's on to the next one. Develop the characters more and expand on their situations.
Also, the rewind thing was cool at first, but now it's become repetitive and boring. Save the alternate endings for interactive stories. For short stories choose the one ending you think is best and go with it. Death is repetitive too. Death at the end of all your stories isn't a bad thing, but if you format your stories where every chapter is a new story and they all end in death, then it's not surprising when you read the next chapter and the character dies
Author's Response:
Ah, constructive. Thank you for your feedback.