Date: April 24 2011 5:49 AM Title: Meet Nancy
I really love your story here, great plot and characters. I am not trying to be mean or anything but there are a few grammatical errors that if you would fix would make the reading easier. But I really can wait to see whats in store for this guy. Keep up the good work.
I already told you guys before when i posted this. I don't have spell check so you have to bare with me. Other then that glad you like the story.