Reviewer: Ace Corona Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

a279;a279;a279;a279;a279;In the beginning of the story you wrote: "Then information was in his hands in less than hour-and-a-half" I think the word "an" should be inserted between "than" and "hour." This is getting to be a great read, I find the point in history you're writing about to be very interesting, the turn of the 20th century and World War One.

Author's Response: Thanks1 I don't how I missed that, the first time around.