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Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2019 5:48 PM Title: 8 Days Ago

please sir...more?

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2011 2:43 PM Title: 8 Days Ago

Awesome slow-shrink story! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 30 2011 1:47 PM Title: 8 Days Ago

Not a bad opener! But, there a few things I feel compelled to point out:

1) I think you meant "100%" rather than one thousand and five.

2) Were you referring to the Rainbow Serpent of Australian Aboriginal mythology, or the rainbow boa (E. cenchria) of Latin America?

3) I've never particularly liked the metric system. Which, I guess, makes me a "foot" fetishist! ;-D

Author's Response:

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1) yes i did, I'll fix that.... apparently I wasn't holding down the shift key

2) I was making no references, I was trying to be original and create my own thing (the Rainboa, haha get it?)

3) Clevvvver.  I also prefer the american system (being an american) but I am aware a lot of people are more familiar with metrics, so I put in the simple conversion of 6 x 2.5 = 15cm

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