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Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision

Just caught up, and this story iis still fabulous. It looks like Peter's troubles are far from over, but at least he has one person he can trust. Still, I have a feeling things are going to get a lot worse!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review sir. you are right, things are going to get a lot worse once the story really gets moving

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision

Cool; this story is back! The formatting is a little weird at present, but I assume that can be easily sorted.



Author's Response:

not quite sure what you mean, i guess; if i notice mistakes in formatting i will certainly correct it

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision

Well, wonder of wonders and miracle of miracles! You've finally graced us with a new chapter. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! It's a relief to know you didn't just give up on this story, like so many other authors have done.* :-D

*And, sadly? It's gotten to the point where permanently unfinished stories have become the rule, here, rather than the exception. :-(

Author's Response:

i always am disappointed when i begin reading a story on here, only to see it abandoned permanently, so i try not to do that myself

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision

Glad to see this story again thanks for posting. Forgot what happened an who was who, so I had to reread it lol. But this chapter was beautifully written an I wonder what will happen if his sister finds out, or will Lena just let it slip what happened?

aaron

Author's Response:

thanks for the review; as the chapters have been spread out pretty far, i will try to have mini reminders mid-chapter so readers won't forget past events and get lost

Reviewer: hhhat09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision

Ahh the new chapter was exciting! Im glad you went back to this, defiantely one of my favorite stories from you!



Author's Response:

glad you liked it

Reviewer: WilliamScarlet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10: Tunnel Vision

so glad you continued this story, thank you so much! i really enjoy your writing!



Author's Response:

thanks!

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