[Report This]Date: February 27 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Nice work so far, man! The personalities you've created are unique and consistent. The evolving relationship between Lisa and Peter is fun to read and keeps me coming back for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: February 26 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Progress, it's slow, and barely visible in this story, but something's finally happening other then bullies and class.
Author's Response:
It is indeed
[Report This]Date: February 25 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Ha Suzanne was grasping at everything she could. Thank you Erica for fixing the problem.
What a lovely awesome chapter.
Date: February 25 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Erica playing savior of situation! I bet Peter regret to not telling her about incidents at school.
Author's Response:
She is indeed. Regret or not, he's already lied, so now he'll just have to deal with whatever that brings.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
I guess that all Suzanne can do, at this point, is hope that her son's acting ability stinks. ;-)
Author's Response:
That is literally the last hope here.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2015 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 28: Persuasive Sparring
Erica's icy demeanor is starting to crack a bit. I bet if Jessica were in the room during this conversation, she wouldn't have let her mom use her as an excuse. She probably would have offered to quit her dance classes.
Author's Response:
Her demeanor is indeed cracking. And that's probably an accurate guess about Jessica.