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Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

Have you ever considered to bring Family Reunion back to life? I know it's kinda open-finished, however I'd really love to see any spin-off depicting Tony's and Ashley's everyday life in it's desparate picture, I suposse. I really enjoyed a level of details you actually presented in this story and it would be a pity to leave it covered in dust.

Nevertheless, you've done a great job so far and I look foward to see your next chapters and stories.



Author's Response:

I have considered and even put a little bit of work into a Family Reunion sequel in the past. Someday it may happen, though I can't promise.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

Ah, yes! The buzz-kill of younger siblings.

Author's Response:

Eternally may it buzz.

Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

Good chapter! Im glad to see that this story is still being worked on. 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. I'm hoping to add a bit more to this one in the nearish future.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

Apology (grudgingly) accepted.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2016 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 54: Bedroom Lesson

It's just like Jessica to be jealous of the attention Peter gives to Lisa. Good thing Lisa recognizes it for what it is and knows how to handle it. At some point, Peter's going to have to stop trying to please everyone. He'll have to disappoint Jessica, or at least explain how her overprotectiveness intrudes on his relationship with his girlfriend. Maybe next time they can convene at Lisa's house. I would be interesting to meet her family and they wouldn't have to deal with Jessica's over attentiveness. Great chapter, sir! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. You're right about the crossroads Peter's in; someone's going to be disappointed at some point. And we will definitively be meeting Lisa's family in a future chapter.

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