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Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 63: Opening Jitters

really enjoyed the story, keep it up



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2017 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 63: Opening Jitters

@SpookyTaco: but, what if the next presentation in that Little Theater is a talent show? With silver-eyed Sharon performing as a kind of magician/hypnotist (Zatanna-like tuxedo and all)? And then asking Lisa and Peter to "volunteer?"

Author's Response:

Sharon's already imposing enough without magic powers

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 63: Opening Jitters

It was just a harmless kiss! Whoever was stalking needs to get a life. Seriously. The mean girls just need to leave the little dude alone. Why are they harassing him? I assume because they're jealous or they like him but don't want to admit it.

So what do they think spying and scheming will accomplish? Certainly won't make Peter like them. Hopefully he doesn't have to use any of those self defense moves his sister taught him...which by the way...aren't exactly a great idea. Biting a hand while being held aloft could lead to a loooong fall... 



Author's Response:

Hehe. At least one thing you touched on here (won't say which) will be addressed very soon

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2017 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 63: Opening Jitters

This is like watching JFK's motorcade leaving Dallas Love Field.



Author's Response:

Definitely one way to put it

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2017 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 63: Opening Jitters

Hmmmmm! The play hasn't even had its Opening Night...and already he's being stalked.

Talk about obsessed fans!

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, he's had a few of those for most of this school year

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