[Report This]Date: March 22 2017 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 64: Cry Wolf
Love the ending of this chapter. I'm so excites for the next.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next part will arrive soon
[Report This]Date: March 21 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 64: Cry Wolf
I have such a weak spot for crazy/stalker/sociopath/yandere girls in love. She looks so truly frighteningly obsessed with him. For her, Peter must be an one of a kind guy, in every way possible. With no chances to even find someone as close to him; not to mention the height.
Good for me; bad for Peter.
Poor Peter...
Author's Response:
Hehe. Glad to hear it. She's definitely put her laser sights on Peter and has no intention of letting go.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 64: Cry Wolf
400th comment!
Gotta say, been waiting for Mandy to get ahold of the Freshman.
Author's Response:
Whoooo!
Date: March 20 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 64: Cry Wolf
SpookyTaco, I'm betting Mandy is a cut-out, one with a well-established credibility problem. The question is not who saw Mandy grab Peter, but who saw Sharon talking to Mandy. If anyone can take on the Jack Ruby role in this, it's Amy.
Author's Response:
You're right that the teachers would believe Peter and his friends over Mandy any day. The real solution will be found elsewhere.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2017 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 64: Cry Wolf
Can someone say restraining order?? The only good thing is that all his friends there will KNOW Mandy took him, and they'll report here asap. But...will it be fast enough to save him from...whatever she has planned?
Author's Response:
Peter's counting on that 'good thing' as well. But he'll need to hope they work fast
Date: March 20 2017 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 64: Cry Wolf
Sharon picked her patsy well.
Gotta say, you always do a great job keeping the size difference immediate without getting stale. Just about everyone who talks to Peter has to loom over him, and while he might be used to it by now, we're not (and I'm not sure I want to be). But even when Mandy rests her head almost on the table, her menace is in no way diminished.
Such is her instability, I thought she'd punctuate the conversation by smashing her clay-Peter flat. That she didn't should have been all the clue we needed that she was up to something.
Author's Response:
Thanks! This is a story much lighter on the kind of 'action' my other stories have, so I try to focus more on the subtler moments like the image of everyone just standing around above Peter.
Date: March 20 2017 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 64: Cry Wolf
Uh-oh, Peter is in Mandy's clutches now. I bet Sharon told Mandy that Peter was calling her crazy, and then convinced Mandy to bring Peter to her. Next chapter will be interesting.
Author's Response:
It's likely Sharon said something or other to Mandy. Of course, Mandy isn't always one to listen
[Report This]Date: March 20 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 64: Cry Wolf
WHOA! How did she manage that little Houdini-ism?*
*Which, btw, is what I truly meant by "magic act" in the last review.
Author's Response:
Peter neglected to consider that a clay firing room is probably shared by more than one classroom and thus has more than one exit.