[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 65: First Catch
Whew, that was a close one! I too didn't think she'd actually try to kill him...intentionally. Perhaps accidentially...maybe...but not intentionally.
I agree with geeman. Due to this unfortunate event, Peter's mom will never let him return to public school. There's no way his mom won't find out about the event.
It's too bad because he was just starting to fit in with his classmates.
Author's Response:
There was definitely more going on below the surface with Mandy than Peter might've easily perceived. We'll see next chapter just what's going to happen with the future of Peter's schooling
Date: March 28 2017 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 65: First Catch
Woah, she was actually about to kill him. That's not where I thought this was going. Why would Sharon try to push Mandy over the edge like that? I thought she wanted to get a hold of Peter, not get him killed! We'll see where it goes from here.
Author's Response:
More of the logic in Sharon's machinations may come to light in forthcoming chapters.
Date: March 28 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 65: First Catch
I always love a good toilet scare. As nutty as she is, Mandy doesn't seem to have the necessary fiendishness to properly elaborate the threat.
Clearly, Peter's not going to tell Suzanne about this. Will he even tell Erica?
Author's Response:
You're right that Mandy's probably more complicated than being a straight-up murderer. But there's still plenty of reason to fear her
Unfortunately, whether or not Peter wants to tell Suzanne is probably irrelevant; there were too many witnesses
[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 65: First Catch
I've probably said it before. But, I'll say it again: if sanity were beer, this girl would be permanently five cans short of a six pack.
Author's Response:
And she's not even the drinking age yet
[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 65: First Catch
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 65: First Catch
What? So HE'S the bully now is he? What an unreasonable crazy person. At most he told the truth about her! But now that this has happened can he really get out of this without his overprotective mom finding out? I don't know about that! From what I could tell in this chapter there was more than one person who chased after Mandy, Alita was just one of them. Most likely this is gonna spread by rumor fast, if everyone doesn't know already, and of course assuming the teachers haven't been told already! Yeah, things aren't looking to good for the future of our hero are they?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. And yes, there were multiple people who chased Mandy, so it's highly unlikely Peter can keep this secret.