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Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 68: Off Kilter

Wow - "Or I just took one."

Lisa's clearly more protective of Peter after the latest events, and she has no trouble showing it. It's nice to see her emerge from her shell of timidity and stand up for herself and Peter. Peter's learned to do the same, but of course he'll always need someone to back him up. His inherent weakness makes Lisa grow into a stronger person by necessity, and that's good to see.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Peter and Lisa have definitely made one another more courageous

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 68: Off Kilter

Nice to see Peter growing some teeth talking back. But Watch out for next trio's blow!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately for Peter, just watching for it may not be enough

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 17 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 68: Off Kilter

I don't why the Trio are so incensed? I mean, let's face it: they only seem as a helpless animal in need of rescue and adoption!*


*And they have yet to be proven NOT guilty of those two other abductions.

Author's Response:

Entitlement is a hell of a drug

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 68: Off Kilter

Aggression and territoriality are linked with testosterone, a hormone produced by both boys and girls.

I still don't know what Sharon's endgame is, other than a demonstration of dominance. 



Author's Response:

Odds are, nobody's really going to know Sharon's endgame until she wants them to  ;)

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