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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2017 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 70: Sister Hysteria

Yeah, he's smooth talker but if you're 5 inch tall. you've no real other option! 



Author's Response:

He really doesn't

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 70: Sister Hysteria

Poor Jessie!

She had a bigger case of PTSD than even Peter, himself. And in more ways than one!

Author's Response:

Peter Traumatic Stress Disorder

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 70: Sister Hysteria

Gotta say Peter sure is good at talking to ladies. Sure this was his sister but even before this I've noted his way at connecting emotionally with them to get what he wants. Maybe all his years of being surrounded by doting females has given him these skills out of necessity? Who knows. But he's a smooth talker that's for sure.



Author's Response:

Peter's become very talented at rhetoric over the years as he often has to work just to be allowed to engage in normal-sized human activities.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 70: Sister Hysteria

I didn't like the previous chapter (great writing, just not a fan of that gym teacher). Loved this chapter. Of course this would be Jessica's reaction. She's a great character and shows some growth here, no matter how reluctant. Overall, Peter got the best victory he could hope for when dealing the aftermath and his family. As for Erica, she's planning something. I wouldn't put it past her to see vengeance of some kind. Well, perhaps nto vengeance, but something to ensure certain students pick on Peter less.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Yeah sections like that one aren't for everyone. Glad you liked this chapter more. I won't spoil, but we'll see Erica get to be a true big sister before the story is over.

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