Date: May 14 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 71: Show Stealer
Ok, Jack. Lets see where this is going than. ;) Lets see who really manipulates our stalker and if it is somebody new or somebody that acted nice all the time but isn't.
Author's Response:
The coming chapters will see Peter attempting to puzzle it all out
[Report This]Date: May 11 2017 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 71: Show Stealer
The last couple chapters were great. I'm excited for the next!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 08 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 71: Show Stealer
Mandy found again her little fairy.
Author's Response:
She did indeed
Date: May 08 2017 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 71: Show Stealer
Peter and the people around him come over as dumb now. I like how you write psychological scenes, sometimes onesided and sometimes with the right mix. But this transition is just weird. The choices don't feel relatable.
Author's Response:
It's true more attention could be paid to Peter by authority figures, but there's much more going on here than just negligence.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2017 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 71: Show Stealer
Looks like Round 2 to the Fearsome Foursome. :-(
Author's Response:
Peter's just got to get a second wind.
Date: May 07 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 71: Show Stealer
C'mon, Sharon, you're smarter than to conspicuously keep your seat while everyone else is standing and applauding. You can still eye-fuck Peter while politely clapping. Better not to attend at all and establish a solid alibi elsewhere. Mandy's already been questioned by the authorities, and you can't be sure she didn't name you as a provocateur.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Sharon's fearlessness can easily be compared to recklessness. As nice as it would be to have an alibi, there's always the chance Peter wouldn't have been captured if Sharon wasn't present on this night.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2017 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 71: Show Stealer
I feel, somehow, Sharon and her gang is behind this. Either that, or they'll save him somehow. Either way, Peter's in for a world of pain.
Ironically, i'm kinda hoping we learn a bit more about Mandy. Surely she's not one dimensionally evil. Maybe she's been abused herself. We haven't met her family yet.
Author's Response:
Definitely a fair guess. Without spoiling, Sharon is not NOT involved. And Mandy backstory is indeed finally incoming.