[Report This]Date: September 02 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 74: Boy Toy
This story is great. I'm glad you're still working on it.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 26 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 74: Boy Toy
Who would set up a YouTube channel for such shenanigans! :)
Rather than race for the phone, Peter should be focusing on how to talk Mandy into a less abusive 'game'. The girl seems willing to listen to suggestions. Peter's goal at this point should be survival, not escape. The latter will happen naturally once enough time passes (assuming he's still alive).
Author's Response:
What you're suggesting is definitely what Peter's sister would be screaming at him to do if she could. The real question is whether Peter can resist his inclination to take matters into his own hands.
Date: August 26 2017 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 74: Boy Toy
My favorite thing about petplay is the intrinsic humiliation. Even Lisa would have to stifle a giggle at the sight of Peter in a hamster ball. I doubt Mandy is deliberately trying to humiliate Peter, but indifference to others' dignity is only one of her many social failings. Good thing she's not interested in setting up a YouTube channel.
Author's Response:
This is a concept I enjoy too, so it seemed like the fitting place to use it here. You're right that not every thing Mandy does is pure tactical humiliation; she works a lot on impulse.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2017 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 74: Boy Toy
If only he could roll that ball back home with the SPEED of an El Dorado!
Author's Response:
Unfortunately there are stairs: the natural enemy of the ball