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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 77: TASK FORCE BEANSTALK

Not bad! Although, I think you left out an exclamatory "No!" prior to the "Why not."

Author's Response:

... or the "Why not?"

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