Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 57: Ménage à Julia

Celebrate good times come on. Seems. This story is getting more attention, which is good.

Jack is a genius, how he will get the others out. With keeping himself and the the alive, I have no clue.

That for you to figure out. Thanks again for the update. :D

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! It is indeed getting more attention, and there should be another chapter after not too long.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 57: Ménage à Julia

I'm still thinking what he could have done to save Gina...

Jealousy could backfire spectacularly in many many ways, all of them unpleasant... My favorite solution atm is pride - something like "I wasn't so small last time, I want to be the first 3 inches guy to get in there".

 

And while I still haven't figured out a satisfactory solution, you tell us there's a whole, but everyone is locked away, and even then there's cameras everywhere - is this an IQ test or what?

 

On the bright side, I was irrationally afraid Julia would somehow try to drag him to her side - make him hurt her, something like that. Phew. Plus at least being so small he doesn't have to worry that Julia may get pregnant, that would be really really bad ;p

 

PS

Another chapter after less than a week! yay!!

 

Author's Response:

Not a bad thought there. Honestly, my answer for why it wasn't tried might not satisfy you, but basically, it goes back to the way that Julia still holds a lingering fear that Jack feels something for Gina, and constantly has to test him to reassure herself that he doesn't.  Jack isn't the only one playing mind games here, and he knows it, as does Gina.

I admit it fills me with glee to tease such a risky solution with the hole in the wall. The coming chapters will steadily reveal how the chance to use it might arise.

As for Julia making Jack a little more integral in Gina's endangerment, well... the story ain't over yet, my friend.  ;)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 57: Ménage à Julia

Julia might be the best written villain on this website. Scary and thrilling.

Author's Response:

Oh geesh, I'm gonna blush.  Thanks for reviewing good sir.