[Report This]Date: May 08 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 58: Who's the God Now?
Another great heart attack. Glad for the fast updates "flash." These next couple of chapters will be awesome, since these recent turn of events.
Just don't think it worth risking escape again. Especially with Charles lurking around.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I'm looking forward to hearing what people think of the upcoming chapters.
That's definitely a good concern to have about Charlie, and it's one the group is going to have to contend with very quickly.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 58: Who's the God Now?
What have you done with Jacksmith?
I'm seriously pulling for the little guys and girls here. Seeing how their last attempt went hopefully the Charlie problem can be dealt with sooner than later.
Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! The odds are definitely still against them, but Jack's not going to let Charlie bring this one down without a fight.
Date: May 08 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 58: Who's the God Now?
Kelly... it took me a few seconds to remember who she is ;p
Anyway between Anna, Charlie(*) and the fear of Julia possibly changing her mind after she's had the time to sober up, I can't imagine how they could possibly be thinking straight.
Dunno what's wrong with my mind, but the thought of Julia being so in love with Jack and him being so manipulative makes me cheer for her - until I think of Anna at least.
(*) Not really smart to say those things aloud (how many people could hear them btw?)... I'm starting to believe that being locked in a jar can have bad consequences.
Author's Response:
Believe me, after the next 2 or 3 chapters, you will not be rooting for Julia in the slightest...
Charlie wasn't necessarily trying to throw anyone under the bus at that moment when he shouted all that; he just wanted the hell out of that jar for good.
Date: May 08 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 58: Who's the God Now?
Is charlie a macrophiliac?
Author's Response:
He is indeed.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 58: Who's the God Now?
Oh, I don't know. Three new chapters in almost as many days? That sounds like a pretty average creative spurt to me. But, regardless of what's below average speed, or above it, I will definitely be here to r & r the next suspenseful chapter! :-)
Author's Response:
Well, considering I've been putting out one chapter on this one every 3ish months for a while, I'm calling this particular speed above average. Thanks for reading/reviewing.