Date: February 11 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Very cool. This looks great.
Date: August 14 2012 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Incredibly gripping story. Was practically impossible to put it down once I started reading it. Just in the way that you described the actions and emotions of the characters. Was really easy to imagine that the events were unfolding right before your eyes. Which of course made the ending all the more powerful. With the realization that Scott's mother wasn't the only person in the world who would take pleasure in his humiliating nightmare. :)
Can't wait to see more of this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words, I appreciate the review.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
I loved your take on this old but classic tale--momdom and a tiny son. You did great and it was just the right length. I'd love to see the mom eventually sweat her son away down the line, but you once again used awesome descriptions to how deeply inferior the son was to his Mother's mature, pungent feet. He really was broken by her and I liked how she went about destroying her son's self-worth in a very nurruring, motherly fashion!
[Report This]Date: January 21 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
It is a very go idea for a story, and well written. Good work!
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: January 19 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Sad to see this story end =[. As for your next story, i would like to see the continuation of Jack and Carlys story =].
Date: January 19 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
I'm sad to see it end, a wonderful story sir!
-Jake
Date: January 18 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
yes! yes! yessssss! ella too!? AWESOME!!!
-Jake
Date: January 18 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Ooo this is going to be epic! In so many ways. I'll be watching for the next chapter for sure. Wonder what shoes/sandals are and nail color... If its pink....... BTW love ur storys, never read much but I'm hooked.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
I really like the how vulnerable you protray the son, son tny, naked, and totally demoraize, all before even being subjected to his mom's monstroussly pungent feet! While the mother seems kind and loving, with a hint of a cruel, punishing streak, I have a feeling her feet might be too much this time for her son. Here's to hopeing that things get carried away, and don't end nicely for the time-out son!
Author's Response:
hehe well as you've probably noticed in my past stories i'm not at all a fan of killing my protagonists. i think you'll still enjoy the ending though, which will be posted soon
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
:O AWESOME CHAPTER! I am LOVING this story!!! *Thumbs up
-Jake
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Best set up for a story I have probably seen yet. Love the tension too. I like the mothers feet and toes already....any plans to shrink the gf too? hehe I have more questions but might spoil it :P
Author's Response:
you'll get your questions answered soon enough once i post the remaining chapters, thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: January 17 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Ah man, that's humiliating! Great chapter....
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you enjoyed it
Date: January 17 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
The wait is killing me... Keep going!
[Report This]Date: January 16 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
oh man, I CANNOT wait to find out what time out means!
-Jake
Date: January 16 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
awesome start, can't wait for more!
-Jake
[Report This]Date: January 16 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Not Party Time
Cool premise! I like where this is going. I'll keep an eye out for updates.