Reviews For Toy Town
Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2006 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sister
Date: July 07 2006 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sister
nice one! the different point of views, the toy town setting and the writing itself , all this make a really good story. Please continue!
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2006 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sister
Date: July 06 2006 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Sister
Well done.
A very good story with some interesting theme.
Telling it from different perspectives, with lots of description of the experiences, engages the reader and makes things seem more real.
Author's Response: Thanks, I just took all of the things I'd seen in various stories that I had liked, put my own spin on them...and came up with this.