i liked the set up for this alot but it seemed like the ending was a bit forced. A little more expanding woudl have been great, but nonetheless entertaining read!

Author's Response: I really appreciate your comment, Asuka. Your like one of the best writers in this site..., I was really working hard when making this story. But as I commented in my Author's notes, if you wish you and other writers are free to write up a following sequel to my story. All I want is just my username under Based on Characters based by...Thank you again.