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Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 8:02 PM Title: Day 5

And the relationship dynamic gets more complex



Author's Response:

Indeed. It would be a reality show without a little relationship drama!

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2013 10:28 PM Title: Day 5

Amazing story, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2013 9:06 PM Title: Day 5

I'm starting to dig Serine but sue kind of took a bit of a bad but not -bad- turn towards the end.

 

Still excellent read and if I'm pulling for anyone it's likely her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2013 4:24 PM Title: Day 5

Story is getting better. I like how the chapters got longer and longer.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks! From here on out, each days will be broken into two or more chapters because I don't want to go more than about 10 MS Word pages per chapter.

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