[Report This]Date: July 08 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Truly the best story ive ever read on this site! but you should add more to the end
[Report This]Date: January 17 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter, hope the wait for chapter 3 isn't too long.
Author's Response: I am going through the rounds responding to most of the reviews, which is usually something I do if I expect the chapter to be posted within the next 48 hours. Sorry about the wait,I just generally like to have the next chapter's rough draft finished when I send off it's predecessor to the general reading community here. I hope you will continue to both read and enjoy.
Date: January 16 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great writing so far, and can't wait for the next chapter! Breast focused chapters are a personal favorite of mine, and I feel like there aren't enough stories with shrunken couples that also use breast torture. Brooke seems like she'll give the two of them quite a bit of hell before letting them out.
Author's Response: Oh yes she will! I didn't trust myself to write full breast chapter but (spoiler alert!) they do spend almost all of chapter 3 in between the male objects of interest located on Brooke's upper midsection
Date: January 16 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
love both chapters :-)
[Report This]Date: January 15 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for the complimentary response. Like you, I can enjoy the male perspective of being in the clutches of a giantess like Brooke in this current chapter.
Author's Response: I am glad you liked round two, oh great timescribe. On a previous review by someone on this story, they had stated that people dind't like middleschoolers brought into it. I mentally pointed at the amazing piece of authorship by you that is "Mrs Long's New School." I didn't have time to get past the 5th Grad echapters on my first readthrough and you still hooked me!