Reviews For A Meaning in Life
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Expostion

The opening paragraphs are very descriptive and somewhat emotional. I liked it. If you expand upon them then they would make for a nice prologue.

Here:

I replied back to here.

You mean: her

Other than that minor mistake it's a decent chapter.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Expostion

This is a great story so far, just keep it going, it looks like its heading in an interesting direction.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Expostion

Not bad for a first attempt. Me being a gentle giantess author myself, I know this is definitely up my alley. Now onto the review.

You do a good job with the description of the character. Your grammar and spelling is neat and tidy which is surprisingly uncommon with first time writers, so good job. Again, since this is your first story, I won't criticise much.

Actually, I don't think I have a criticism. I like the idea of him being very shy AND very shrunk with his crush. Hope updates are longer and frequent. 

Peace.

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