Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Rest of my Life

It's good that you explained why the strange liquid was there. I was wondering the same thing. Although I don't think that it's very believable that she would choose to store it at school because a student might find it. Perhaps locked in a safe at home? Anyway, I understand that you wanted to quickly get to the shrinking part so it'll be interesing to see how Bridgette and Charlie's relationship develops as a result given how that is supposed to be the main focus of the story.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Rest of my Life

Still enjoyable. I like the past scenario of Ms. Moe, but gosh, why would all the other students let a kid keep trying to stomp out their own teacher?

But a good story nonetheless. I am definitely liking this.