Date: February 16 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
A good start. I like the descriptive language you use.
Date: February 15 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've been reading stories on this site for the better part of the last 5 years and never created an account. Your story has changed that. I had to tell you how well you've written it. The characters have actual depth and, while there is size play, it's secondary to the overall power dynamic. This is definitely one of my favorite stories. Keep it going!
Author's Response:
I don't even know what to say.. Wow. I am incredibly flattered. Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's nice to see Nicole actually loves (too strong of a word maybe?) Tyler right now. She's in her protective, adoring phase. But what happens when bitchy, dominating Nicole rears her head?
The future holds many secrets. Great story so far. No faults I could find.
Date: February 12 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fucking amazing.
Date: January 31 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please do not NOT finish this story! This is a fantastic story and it reads as if it was written by a seasoned veteran. Thank you for your contribution!
Date: January 24 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
You certainly know how to build up a relationship early on. Since you know how to do this, could you take a look at my story and leave an honest opinion on it? You don't have to but I would very much like feedback from another author so experienced at this.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
(Hacking into site system. Changing star count to 1000. Gives a thousand stars.) Darn! It still only shows up as 5! But more to the point.
Slow shrinking ho! Nicole is one of those gentleevil giantess' that can change at a moment's notice. Loving it man!
Author's Response:
5 is plenty, thank you :) And yes, I want to make sure Nicole keeps Tyler on his toes throughout. If he isn't under hers, anyway........
[Report This]Date: January 24 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
You've got a very good thing going here. You take decent time to get the characters established without compromising the flow of the action, so your characters feel fully fleshed out by the time things start getting busier. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
I'll be trying, thanks! All your contributions here were a big factor in me trying to make this small one so thank you.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good chapters and dialogue. If I didn't know any better, I would say you've been writing on this site for a while. Hard to believe this is only your first story.
Author's Response:
Thanks dudeman, I have been reading stories here for quite a while.. I've never had much motivation to write but it felt like a contribution was long overdue.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Two words: hanky-panky. ;-D
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Two words: hanky-panky. ;-D
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I must say, being your first story this is very enticing. I myself am fond of slow character building before any actual shrinking occurs. I see tons of new stories uploaded a day, but this is the most promising out of all. I can't wait to see where you are taking this with the giantess scenario. I am definitely going to keep tabs on this story.
Author's Response:
Really makes it a lot easier for me to write when I know people are waiting for more.. thanks for your review :)