Date: February 15 2014 9:19 AM Title: Coming to terms
interested to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2014 10:00 PM Title: Coming to terms
I really enjoyed this story. My favorite part of all was this short sentence ""Sorry if i don't choose to come and visit you any time soon. I hear Stacy's bowels are really bad this time of year, so", because I am a hugh fan of irony and sarcasm, combined with humiliation. I would wished you had used conversations clips like that more often.
Author's Response:
That line sounds familiar but I can't remember from what story it is from and can't find it anywhere. Do you know what chapter and story it is from? And yes, sarcastic and ironic lines are always good when combined with an erotic nature and I do like to use them but only for certain characters. I can't imagine one of my more niver characters saying something so cruel and so these lines are only reserve for people like Stacy and the like. That's probably why they aren't used as much as they should be.
Date: February 03 2014 11:03 AM Title: Coming to terms
Deffinetly liking the story so far, certainly an interesting plot twist with Stacey making her sister "dissapear" for the moment; Can't wait to see what happens to her inside of Rebbecca :3
Also interested to see how Micheal and the Munchkin's are doing inside of Stacey. :)
Can't wait to read more!
Date: February 03 2014 3:34 AM Title: Coming to terms
Glad to see you continue the story ,as I really enkoy it. I would love to see Stacy swallow someone alive now, as vore is my favorite thing, and with REbecca doing it to Kate, inthe story it oculd give Stacy the idea, it's a torturous punishment that takes care of theevidence. And wasn't there soemthing earlier about Emma being picked on?> Could be a good way to deal with that individual. ;)
Author's Response:
Right now I'm working on the Munchkin arc but don't worry. Stacy has very good ideas about getting rid of evidence and knows the power of digestion in getting rid of it. If you want vore then the next arc might be about Kate's suffering with Rebecca =)
[Report This]Date: February 02 2014 11:44 PM Title: Coming to terms
Glad to see this back.
Author's Response:
Yes, I might make another chapter or two, depending on what people vote for if they vote at all.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2014 11:41 PM Title: Coming to terms
You did a great job with this chapter. I liked how you had her listen to the baby's stomach and the line right now shes taking care of her hunger
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm trying to make it seem natural as posible that she is twisting and transforming into this monster. A monster with a size ray, muhahaha. Also, do you have any preference to what the next chapter should be?