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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2013 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 4: Endgame

I've been trying to sort my thoughts for the last few minutes, but I think I've got some sort of writer's block (possibly due to most of the action being squeezed in a songle chapter :)

 

So, well... wow!



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Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 4: Endgame

It's a great short story,  could be drawn out into several more detailed chap's, but you allowed the reader to experience the 'first-time', along with her, as she selected her first captive, and even gave her reasons for 'choosing' that particular victim.

Her blackmail tactic, even more devious, forcing her tiny helpless mortal man to choose his own life- to ultimately be given to her as a sacrifice.....Willingly!

Amazing combination of desire, and erotic domination.  ;`)'''

 



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Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it.

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