[Report This]Date: December 12 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I remember this story! I like how it says "Completed: No"... that is promising. ;)
A point of criticism though: You said her breath lacked oxygen and carbon dioxide. The lacking oxygen part is true, but the carbon dioxide is mainly what her exhalation would be. That would of course be poisonous to humans and animals and probably wipe them out, but plants on the other hand would benefit from it... other than the fact it would greatly contribute to global warming since it is a greenhouse gas.
Then again, if the planet is reduced to bling between her cleavage then I suppose photosynthesis is out of the question anyway, as there probably wouldn't be much light from the sun in there.
It would be interesting if humanity could somehow adapt using technology or whatever to survive as Lil Kim's bling. That would take some adjusting though. It would probably involve harnessing her body heat or something like that in a similar manner to geothermal energy.
But even if humanity is extinct, at least there are other alien civilizations out there for Lil Kim to conquer and blingify. If humanity wasn't advanced enough to adapt to becoming her bling, then maybe there is some other species out there that is worthy of the task?
Author's Response:
Sorry, I was never good in science. I always thought we exhaled carbon monoxide, but either way, my thought was humanity choking on Lil Kim's used air :)
Thanks for your comments! I always appreciate hearing other people's thoughts on what I've written.