Reviewer: sickpuppies Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2014 7:16 PM Title: and that's how the cookie crumbles.

Defiantly a big improvement! Its still a bit rough around the edges, but practice will smooth that right out. I’m not sure if you re-read your writings after you finish them. If you don’t, I highly recommend it. You get a much better sense of how a story is flowing.

 

And for ideas, I always like it if the shrunken people manage to get trapped inside the giant’s shoes for a little bit. That’s always fun.

Author's Response:

i was thinking of that idea myself and ill definatly start reading over them.