Date: July 24 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story and nice setting. Ryan got what he deserved.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the thinly-disguised satire within her rant. Very quasi-Swiftian!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great Story, i like it when giantess are more than only rampage mashines of destruction :)
I really do hope you continue this even if only in another story.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful ending to an awesome story, can't wait for the sequel ;)
Date: August 21 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love that last chapter. Can't waIt to see what Alex has in store for little Ryan. Hes had it coming for a while.
[Report This]Date: August 20 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant! Ryan deserved everything he got!
Then you threw us that scene with Tasha struggling to decide over whether to kill Erwin or not. Now we'll see whether Ryan gets to live or not.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of two stories I have become a total slave to reading. Please continue.
Date: August 01 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
DEFINITELY ONE OF MY FAVORITE ONGOING SERIES ON THIS WEBSITE
Keep up the good work.
:D
Date: August 01 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
If Jaden doesn't have a good ol' fisticuffs brawl with Ryan, I'm going to be disappointed.
Date: August 01 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hanging on the edge of my seat. MORE PLEASE!
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wonder how long Ryan's final moments will be dragged out?
Date: July 26 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I must say I find it very clever how you manage to tie in different elements that most people forget about. Kind of like the show Avatar. Awesome job developing Alex's character.
I can't wait to see the big climactic battle.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was a little confused at the end, who was Alex pointing her gun at?
I thoroughly enjoyed this and yes, Alex does have a real dilemma. Make Jaden a mega who could help stomp Ryan despite Jaden saying he was fine with his size as it or shrink Ryan and crush him right there but pass on making Jaden their equal in size?
Ryan tried his best to make Jaden hate Alex but haha it failed so badly. I can't wait to see who she fires the gun at and also what the gothic giantess is waiting for.
Author's Response:
She's pointing it at Ryan.
The gothic giantess....oh you'll see you'll all see...I did give a spoiler alert about her; just make sure you remember her and remember her well.
Date: June 21 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
If it slipped your mind then don't worry about it, none of us are professionals but your story is one of the best I've read on this site.
You structure your giantess scenes around a solid and well thought out plot. I mean no disrespect to any authors on this site but I've read story's that are nothing but fetish material made to look like it had a plot.
And yes I've noticed the effort you put into making your characters as real as possible. I tried to do the same thing in my first story but I don't think most of my characters came all that close (I'm trying to correct that in my new story).
Your characters talk normally, act normally, and feel like they could be real people. Sure sometimes Ryan seems like he's more of a cliche villain (a villain that is always shown doing something evil just to show off how evil they are) but he's still a great antagonist. And the protagonists like Jaden, Alex, and Ava are very three dimensional, well thought out, and all round likeable characters. The chapter where Alex almost kills Jaden is the best example (as well as my favorite scene) because we see the good and the bad side of Alex, we see some incredibly interesting moments in Jaden's past, and we see sweetheart Ava make everyone feel better.
Date: June 15 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just realized the New World Order tag. If this story ends how I think it does...
[Report This]Date: June 11 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! I can't wait for the finale, I'm expecting things to get really ugly!
Date: June 04 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't think you'll need to wait twelve chapters to see how Ryan fares, it looks like it has five chapters left.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Theres nothing really wrong with the chapter in terms of errors. Good chapter though, and I cant believe I felt myself rooting for Tasha and Crystal. Alex and Ava were kinda being bitches in this one. Both Alex and Ava have good reason to be on edge but Id say out of the 4 girls, Crystal has had it worse by far. And here she is convincing her friend to help these two...
Anyway, great stuff, I didnt even really mind the unedited chapter.
Author's Response:
Why thank you.
Date: May 26 2014 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Powerful chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome stuff! I am so hyped for the next chapter. What's a 'mange'? So you mean manga? If thats the case you know what we think, hell yeah! But can you do it? Do you have the time? That's really the question here.
Author's Response:
It would take sometime to do especially since this would be a fourth project to put down in my manga section.