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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I agree with the Commander Richarda thing, the fact that hes able to flatout say 'no' to uphold his duty despite the obvious power difference is deserving of much respect. Getting mushed by a beneath someones foot is a sad death for a such as him. Its weird how much can be conveyed by a character just by plainly uttering the word 'no', like that.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Indestructible is one thing, but just how is he supposed to fight with that? He doesn't have super strength or anything.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

 No turning back now for Tasha. I still think she is making a huge mistake in challenging Ryan who controls the entire facility  which effectively means she is fighting more than him. Should have waited a while, maybe team up with Jaden and the two girls before taking him on.

 As for Jaden being an asset, maybe he could be the future of humanity? A race of humans that could survive  a giant attack would be useful. 

Reviewer: highheight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Are you dead or just taking a break?

If the latter when will you be back, and can you give us a warning next time you take a break?

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was so much more heart wrenching than the previous chapter. Man, I haven't felt such feelings since Nomad but it was stronger in the latter. Even so, well done.

  Really turned Tasha  from a sadistic horny bitch to someone more likeable. Having a violent talk with Ryan? Is she strong enough to even put the fear of God in him. 

  Jaden and Alex are still better off than in the last chapter and it is nice to see the two of them bond. 

 Now that you have updated yours, I wonder where Darien is with the sister story? 



Author's Response:

Lmao I'm waiting on that myself.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not really everyone else gadget, most authors still don't. Just you, me, JohnnyScribe, Openhighhat, TinyDann, DX might but it will probably be for a Titan story. Then there is vgiv to round up the cast. Not many. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

I dont think this story really needs the pics. I mean if you want to its fine but dont feel obligated to do a bios just because everyone else is.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, just wow. Jaden is a failed experiment? Guess he belongs here as much as the rest of them do. Alex and Ava were overly harsh on him, like they said, should have waited until he was ready.

 Alright, Tasha is not as bad as she seems but if she were really good, she'd think of a way to beat Ryan to death. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

What about the pictures of all the characters tho?

Author's Response:

May have to hold off the pics a bit longer. I'm picky when it comes to making bios and right now I can't seem to find a picture that I believe best fits the character. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

PS: for the 100th review of this story, I will join in... KILL RYAN!!!
&, as another reviewer said, I would like more dirty scenes in there :)... Hoping that insertion tag you have gets used :D

Author's Response:

Every tag I used will be in lol...I know everybody wants it, I just had to built it up a bit

 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Tasha in league with Ryan? I imagine a lot of people would be. I don't know what'll happen just that it will be painful.

Also, poor Crystal! One parent dead and now knowing that she will die as well!

Kill Ryan and kill Tasha! I am sending my giantess in, she is twice as big and much deadlier than Ryan. 



Author's Response:

Ryan has made it to alot of people's hit list. Jesus, so much passion and fire in the giantess community.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wait whhhaaaat!?

Surprisingly, I didn't see that coming. Now that I think about it, I should have seen it coming.



Author's Response:

There's still things you won't see coming....All in the next chapter....maybe lol.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

I admit it isn't impossible but if Ryan should die, they probably won't turn Jaden into a mega. At least not intentionally, he could become one or shrink Ryan down to make him pay for what he's done.



Author's Response:

Yes...He could avenge the baby seal that Ryan just couldn't leave alone.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

@Nostory, I think she still can, it sounds like Alex is tall, she could be a bit taller than him still even if he was made into a mega



Author's Response:

Let me ask the great universe and see what they say lol.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

@angeloflife, that would be something. I don't think it could be that simple but if he does then Alex might not able to call him squirt anymore. 



Author's Response:

A squirt will always be a squirt....now let's go find that baby seal before Ryan comes lmao.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

What could Ryan have about Jaden that would make Alex wanna kill him? Oh man, dat suspence...

And poor Crystal is also one of Ryan's victims. How the hell is this guy getting away with everything?

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

@JTC/Nostory.. Lol. A tyrant saving a kitten

Author's Response:

Lmao I know right can you just imagine the cool points he would get if he stopped a car from running one over. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well Ryan is not giving us a lot of reasons to want him to live now is he? 

The bastard must die.



Author's Response:

Lmao! I see Ryan isn't very popular around these here parks. Lol maybe he'll do something nice like save a kitty or something lol.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think he is hoping that he can make Alex snap and have accidentally kill Jaden in one of her breakdowns. Then when she realises what she's done, he'll offer to step in and cover it up but she must do whatever he says or he'll let her face the music with no protection.

 Once Alex agrees, he will have total control over her for the remainder of her life. Unless Ava and Jaden can come up with something to outsmart him. Maybe fake Jaden's death and lull Ryan into a false sense of security. Force a shrinking pill on him, shrink him down and then have Alex do whatever she wants to him before she squashes him like the bug he is. 



Author's Response:

Lol you all really want him to die huh? Lol

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Does Ryan have a plan to use Alex to kill Jaden? Or does he expect her to do it based on how she's been towards him in the past few says?

Oh the suspence is killing me!

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