Date: May 02 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Forgot to add this but those were some sweet moments between Alex and Jaden, learned a lot more about their personal likes and dislikes.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Have to say, this is probably one of the best stories on the site. You take time to set up characters and make then truly relatable. And from the sounds of it, none of them are one-dimensional either. They all have a level of depth that's easy to sacrifice for a more smut filled story. I applaud you and your writing style and I'm looking forward to future chapters. (You should also know that I only review a story when I really like it, so this truly is a compliment from me ;) )
Date: May 01 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a cute couple they are!!! I can't wait to see they two be together . Lol
Date: May 01 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
@JTC Agree. If giants/giantesses start going all over the world(out of the town/project, even if it's for peaceful reasons, things will certainly be interesting. That's wjy, depending on how things end, it'd be cool to write some kind of sequel a few years later, similar 2 ultradude
Anyway, back to this story.. With so many plot twists, and your great writing, can't tell what the hell's gonna happen next. So pumped to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Their actually might be a sequel the way things are going....that's the only spoiler I'm giving away....Well I said MIGHT. Well I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. I think it's sonething everyone wanted to see, so I hope I pull this off right.
Date: May 01 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
@Stubbornstain.... Not sure if that'll work, but If it all ends peacefully, and all these countries are left over with more giants than antidote, could definitely see giant communities spreading around the world, maybe an idea of a sequal ?.. Something like ultradude's stories, but with your own touch?
Just an idea
Author's Response:
Not only that, but you also have to take in to account that's despite them being giantess, their not adults. Alex and Ava are both 18 and 19. Jaden is 18 Ryan if anything isn't any different. The only thing about Ryan and why is in the position he's in is because his parents worked for the government and he was the first mega that ever surfaced. So it's only natural for him to run things in that particular environment. Not only that, but say that they did run off to another country, whose government also operates behind closed doors. Whose to say it would be any different? In situations like this there will always be somebody trying to be in the position of power and take over. Which is why I can understand the concept of a giant woman being powerful and dominant, but just off killing any and everybody she sees because she has no soul.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
@JTC: Agreed. Ife stopped trying to figure this one out. Lol.. Just know there's gonna be tons more plot twists
Author's Response:
Exactly. :) Im sure this story will have you guys on the edge of your seats.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
@JTC: Agreed. Ife stopped trying to figure this one out. Lol.. Just know there's gonna be tons more plot twists
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ava should not have called Ryan, she just made things worse. Alex needs to really make it up to Jaden, that poor guy is going to suffer now that Ryan has set his sights on him.
Date: April 30 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love how your story & Whos the Bigger Peeson have such similar plot lines, yet the writing styles make each one feel so different. You two ever considered doing a project together when you're respective stories are finished ?
Author's Response:
To be honest we haven't talked lol. I wouldn't mind collaborating though.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome premise for the story buddy. Really enjoying how you are building everything up so far. I didn't expect Jaden to have such a messed up past, makes me feel for the guy, especially considering what Alex is putting him through.
It's gonna be interesting seeing how Alex handles what she just did. Also I'm looking forward to seeing Ava's reaction :)
Keep up the good work, definetly watching for this one!
Date: April 29 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
PS: Agree with whoever said that there should be more normal sizes characters... Maybe they'll come in later when the spring break is over and people are back from vacations?
Author's Response:
Again in due time my friend in due time.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad she's starting to see how much of a terrible person she's been...In many ways she's no better than her boyfriend. I guess the fact that she feels bad at the end makes her a little better.
It's still up in the air whether she would have killed him in her rage fuelled trance or not if he hadnt relapsed. Towards the end it looked like she was gonna go through with it, or at least break some bones. As some people have said he was nearly chomped in half!
That spasm of his possibly saved his life. Great stuff, I really like this story!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am in love not only with the plot but the style of writing you use. You use all of the right words and make note of the perfects things within each characters minds, and the scenes themselves. I am looking forward for more! And if you could, I would love if you would respond to my challenge titled "A Slight Miscalculation". If you have the time or interest! I am in love with your style and I feel it would be really cool to see what you would do with that prompt. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review it really meant a lot to me sense I'm trying to better my writing and test it in different areas. Also, since this is my first gts story I don't know if I'm able to actually draw up the full picture of what your challenge is asking for. After this story is over or close to being over I might give it a 1 or 2 chapter shot and see how it comes out.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
So are the megas/super giants/whatever the only men who are Alex's/Ava's size?... Still don't quite get that
Author's Response:
I'll explain it in the next chapter.
Date: April 27 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
You're welcome... I find whenever I write, whether It be an erotic story or not, I can't usually have anything pre written.. It throws me off somehow.
Still, ver impressive that you write such long chapters each day
Date: April 27 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Agree with the response to my last question... I'm the US, as well as many other large and powerful countries/institutions, there's a lot going on behind closed doors... Probably should take what only 1 person in the project is saying as a gain of salt, and like you said, they were just getting into how they're friends ex acts, so ya, maybe not so reliable.
Also would be curious as to if these are pre written or not... Either way, they're all very well done.. Twitch each chapter, the readers always get something answered, but it only then dices deeper into a whole hosts of other questions... Great suspense.
Also, like I said, I've always liked the mixed size world stories, and followed the Adam and Ashley/giantess high series (wasn't a member though, so didn't get to review :( )... I have to say, after reading this, as well as Who's Really The Biggr Person Here (Alex reminds me a lot of Amy in that story) it puts Adamand Ashley to shame, for sure.
Author's Response:
I enjoyed ultradudes stories as well and I'm also a fan of "Who's the bigger person here." To answer the question is this story prewritten...it isn't. I actually woke up this morning with idea in my head and typed it out. Just pure imagination and motivation. Also, I do appreciate your praise for this story as it is my first and I wasn't actually sure if I could write one of these. Let alone add the fetish part into it. I'd say that I've actually surprised myself the most. But I do thank you though. Your compliments and criticism means alot.
Date: April 27 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok... Makes sense... And can understand y they have so many luxuries in the town if multiple countries are pumping money into it.
Author's Response:
Also, I want to apologize for the typos in my last response. I am currently replying to reviews from my phone at the moment. There is something that I wanted to point out to all readers. When dealing with government nothing is necessarily factual. If that was the case, then we wouldn't be second guessing our own government in reality. Now taking upon the explanation that Ava's character gave, you have to understand that she is only saying what she knows, experienced and what she is told. Which in fact, may seem to open the door to more questions that she may not have the answers for. Also, remember this is only the fourth chapter and I've just basically given this story a backbone as to why a character mentioned in the first couple of chapters acts the way they act.
I do appreciate the questions and criticism, but I don't want you to forget what the main focus of the story is at this point. Also, that even dealing with the U.S. In fiction is just like dealing with the U.S. In reality. We never really know what the country is thinking and why the government does what it does. They just do it and throw an explanation at us and we take it for what it is. You can never make a government so simple in fiction, because they aren't in reailty.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
So, all other giant people are girls?, with only 1 man 1 giant guy for each every major country?
Also, just some constructive criticism, or something that might've been overlooked, if this whole town is basically a giant military base for the USA, why would they let other countries keep their giants/giantesses ?there?.. Is it only with allied countries?
PS: if there are other country's giantesses there, will the giantesses in each country be different sizes, sort of like the Country's and Sizes Series?
Author's Response:
To that point about the military base. Ava said it was project. I don't believe I ever said where the city was actually located. Not to mention you have take in the fact that the U.S. As allies that are most like funding this project to. Thus, explains why giantess from other countries are in this just as well. Although you may have enemy countries, this is most like a test to see how well interaction is. Also, that doesn't take away the fact of what the Giants and giantess were actually created for. War is still war and allies can become enemies and vice versa. Better to keep your friends close and your enemies closer. Also, yes they will very in size.
Date: April 26 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just thought of something.. Up until this point, we've only seen giantesses.. Maybe Ryan's the only giant in the town/project. If that's true, and Alex's just broken up with him, that'd explain her taking out her anger/longing for a guy her size on Jaden... It'd also explain y ryan is trying 2 get her back & always calling her... Knowing she'll come crawling back to him if he's the only regular sized man. Something tells me Jaden still won't have to worry about Ryan himself, but the anger he's causing Alex.
My other theory, Ryan hasn't seen Alex since she was a giantess, but they've kept in Contsct, & she doesn't want him to see her in her new form.
My final question, will we ever find out why the goveremt is turning people into giantesses?
Author's Response:
In due time my friend all in due time.
Date: April 26 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thought about it more... Something tells me Ryan's normal sized, but Jeden won't have to worry... It'll be Alex doing all the worrying... Maybe Ryan won't be such a bad guy... That is, to everyone but Alex and Ava... Idk, just random Thoughts I've been having
Author's Response:
Lol really? is that your final answer?