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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm sure they can make something work eventually, right? Seems strange that they'd still be using the games consoles of today at a time in the future when they can make giantesses. I'm starting to think Alex is the one with the fetish.

Author's Response:

Well yea, but its only like six years ahead and the 360 and PS3 were out for about that long, before they decided to make something to new, so its kind of the same concept. Also, about Alex....Wait and see, you may be right or you may be wrong. Only time will tell.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, Alex really has it out for him. I can only hope things get better for Jaden or he won't live long. Nice first story by the way!

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

Whoooooo! Abuse!! I hope Alex grows a conscience!!

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow she really goes out of her way to harm this little guy. Although he is acting pretty pathetic and seems to deserve it in some respects lol fallen in love with this story wishing I was Alex to torture wimpy guy :p

- frankie

Author's Response:

Someone seems like they would be a fun giantess lol 

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

What's this bitches damage? There better be one hell of a good explanation for why she acts this way. If she really didn't care Jeden could just be ignored but she's going out of her way to harm him. I don't see him approaching her again after this. 

Points for depicting the most generous government I've ever heard of.



Author's Response:

Everything happens for a reason. Remember that when your reading this story lol 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter... This story still could go either way. Maybe Jaden's gonna explore the outside world, & get a break with another girl?.. Since they're both teens, is there some kind of school that's set up for them ?

Author's Response:

So far its going to be rather long story of people getting to know each other, so yes there will be some outside fun time. :D

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