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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

A truly...climactic chapter. ;-D

Reviewer: Altos84 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

I agree with your last statement.   Thus must have been a hard chapter to write.   I may not be a writer but as a reader I thought it was great.   I also think it's cool how he is small but still durable.   And maybe someday Ryan will Geri a taste of his own medicine.  

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 12

Got a little X-rated there at the end, in my opinion, but since this is giantessworld.net, it's not X until a penis and vagina officially combine, I guess.

This was a pretty good chapter. I think I like Tasha a little more now. Maybe. She's still pretty murderous. Still don't understand why Ryan has to stsy alive for sk long. Nor why Jaden being a half-Mega would change anyone's perception of him in a negative light.

Although that means he's the only person to be able to infiltrate the facility and steal the anti-Mega formula, force him to drink it, and get him to finally die horribly.

Touché, JTC. This is now the best chapter ever.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 12

The section about Tasha seemed really random. It's a nice chapter but I didn't think the transition from sadness to sex was realistic. It seemed a bit rushed given how upset Jaden was.

Here:

you know were supposed to be friends 

You mean: we're



Author's Response:

I figured in the form of writing it must have been, but I've been that upset before in real life so to speak....well not death death upset but it is possible to transition that way. Depending on who you are the person your dealing with. 

Reviewer: highheight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 12

Another amazing chapter, this one was one of the best, and most chilling chapters yet! Why must you always send chills down my back? Is the nerds story going to become more prominent to the plot? Where are our promised images?



Author's Response:

Postponed lol I'm really picky when it comes to bios

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

This was by far the best chapter in the entire story, nuff said.

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