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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

That was pretty scary; good job. Hopefully it won't be long before the torment ends though.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

Good chapter. Needed less living Ryan. Needs more Commander Richard scharacter development  and more dead Ryan. But then again, every chapter needs more Ryan killing in it. If you posted tge same chapter where Ryan dies three times in a row, I'd probably still give all three chapters five stars.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Lots of action in this chapter... Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

Knew Tasha was up against but shit's going down now, Jaden shot, Alex and Ava so helpless now that Ryan has come for their little guy friend. I don't know how they will get out of this one.

Just can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yep shit has just now hit the fan.

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