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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 27

WHEW! I can't believe I read all these inervening chapters in one sitting. You do know how to spin one riveting yarn!

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 27

Goddammit! So here I am coming back to this story after a while, and THIS is my ending for Ryan? Yeah, sure I wanted him to die in the most gruesome way possible, but I didn't want him limbless, losing blood and left for dead, while he cries in repentance for what he did.

Actually, maybe that WAS what I wanted to see. But I didn't want him LEFT for death. That's TOO cruel. I have standards, for Pete's sake!

Actually, I don't know if I mind this. Let me mull this over for a while.

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 27

Sorry that I haven't reviewed this story In a while but I will admit it's amazing to finally see Ryan get everything he deserved in the sexiest way possible :) amazing story well done

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 27

Nice story and glad Alex got her revenge over Ryan. Hopefully the final chapter will contain some gentle fun with Alex and Jaden. All in all Alex barly showed much gentle behavor in the whole story. Mostly only after she realised her mistake as she tortured jaden thinking it was ryan.

 

And after she had her revenge on ryan so cruel it would be a nice contrast to see her acting gentle to Jaden in the end. :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 27

A little hypocritical of Alex to mutilate Ryan and leave him for dead just minutes after advocating for Tasha not to kill Erwin...But it's not as if Ryan didn't deserve everything he just got and more!

Anyway this story was great! I really loved the wild ride! I'm looking forward to how you wrap this story up next chapter, and what your future gts writting plans are!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 27

This was a great way to end off the story... And Ryan :)... If there's one more chapter, that's awesome.

In addition, I totally can see this working as a sequal. With the great set of characters you got here, I'm sure you could work something out!

By far one of the greatest first attempts at a story I've ever seen on this site!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 27

I enjoyed it very much and if there is a sequel to this then I can't wait to read it.

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