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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Case

I like this. Hope to see more.

aaron

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thanks you!

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 08 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Case

Dialogue in italic? Now that's something I don't see very often, and I like it.

Crush scenes aren't my favorite, but hopefully now that Emilia has successfully tested her formula, she'll have more ideas on how to enjoy shrunken men. Then again, perhaps she's just looking to get rich off of it, and she's willing to deal with anyone who gets in her way.

This is definitely a neat story you've started. A very interesting idea.

It's also very well written, considering that English is not your first language. A small amount of spelling mistakes, but I barely noticed.

I'm eager to see more!

 



Author's Response:

thank you for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated ;)

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