[Report This]Date: June 05 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Therapized!
I noticed that Morgan referred to his receptionist as 'my Clara'. Does that mean that they were in a relationship? Or possibly married? In either case, it's still horrible that they had to die. Aura doesn't seem to care that she's murdering people. Sure, she didn't like her therapist, but the receptionist was just meanless slaughter. Only for the purpose of pleasure. This concerns me, as I was hoping that perhaps Bob might survive.
The mouth play was fantastic! And I'm also glad you didn't elaborate on what happened to Morgan after Aura swallowed him, since digestion is quite terrifying.
Glad you're keeping up with this story, because I find it very interesting. I've fallen behind in reading this, and will be reviewing the chapters seperately, as you're clearly not getting enough reviews for your effort.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad to see that you've actually kept reading and reviewing this story. It means a lot, thanks =D
Morgan wasn't supposed to say "my Clara" there, it somehow got overlooked during the proof reading, my bad >.< thanks for pointing that out! I just fixed it....
I agree with about digestion, it's the only part of macrophilia I don't like.
Again, I appreciate the time you put into reading and reviewing this story =)