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Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Man Down

Guess I was wrong. Looks like the BSS goons did get there first to set off the traps.

That was...strange. I mean, she captured three of them alive, and felt bad about having to kick one of them, and nearly crushing another in her fist. Still, she was very eager to stomp the first man who came through the back door. It almost feels like her Aura persona took over to make the first kill, and her previous timid demeanor stepped in to save the rest? Just seems a bit weird to me.

Just when Martin was hoping for a lead, he loses 4 guys. Ahh well. Now Aura has 4 toys(including Bob) to keep her satisfied for a while.

Even though there's been more crushing than I would have liked, I'm still enjoying this story a lot. Eager to see more!



Author's Response:

The idea was that Aura, being greatly afraid of the four large men and the consecutive loud noises, lost control dude to the fear and impulsively killed the first man (stomping him again and again as if she can't stop herself), and then the she had that little encouter with the driver. She then saw the driver shrinking down, and knowing that he was the last man (3 heaps of clothes + the driver shrinking) she overcame the fear and then went on to collect the men alive so she can have her time with them. So the first death wasn't really what she'd wanted but she didn't care that much about it either!

Also, she again reacted out of fear of losing the bald guy (the runner) 'cause he could become an important witness later on, and she "prefered" them alive, but even if the runner had dieded then and there, I don't think she would sweat it! :D

It is possible that this whole "I want to have my fun with the tiny ones but if they die who cares" idea wasn't as vivid in words as it was in my mind.

Yea I figured you're more into more gentle stuff like vore/mouth play or maybe a little exploration? I myself am more into crushing (obviously :D ) but I like the rest too and I did try to add as much variety to Aura's experience with tiny people as I could.

Again, appreciate the reviews ;)

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