[Report This]Date: September 07 2009 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Encounter with the Macro Valkyrie
How bog is she because if she isn't miles high and in china there's no way she could kill a billion people (1/7 earth's population) in one fell swoop. Just wanted to bring that to your attention but even with that inconsisitency it's still great!
Date: July 24 2009 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Encounter with the Macro Valkyrie
And by that I mean for your next story don't add interuptions in every sentence (paragragh etc). It's one thing that annoys (aggrivates) me (person).
Date: July 24 2009 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Encounter with the Macro Valkyrie
It's kay...but I'm getting annoyed of all the explanations in the middle of sentences (interruptions)... Like that.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2007 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Encounter with the Macro Valkyrie
It's an okay story megarazefreak, you and your catgirl-mega-giantess-"Oh I don't care what happeds to teh people" fantasies. Oh, well I suppose I didn't write it, and have never wrote one, but yeah.......
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Zalrus IX
Author's Response: Well thank you. but what do you mean?
[Report This]Date: July 11 2006 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Encounter with the Macro Valkyrie
great story but i'm not into the whole "animal-person" thingie... too each his own I guess.